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Toast Recreation

 

60 secs in Lockdown short film

 

(Post 8/13) Script/Final Sound

 

INT. BRIDGE – SUNSET (ARREST)

POLICE OFFICER ARRESTING THE GIRL AND WE SEE A CLOSE UP ON THE GIRLS FACE AS SHE IS PUT IN THE BACK OF THE POLICE CAR

IN THE BACKGROUND THE FAINT SOUND OF THE A11 AND SIRENS (AND HIGH PITCH MUSIC)

 

INT. INTERROGATION ROOM

GIRL IS SAT IN ROOM WITH HAND CUFFS ON AND INTERROGATOR WALKS IN AND SLAMS NOTE BOOK DOWN ON THE TABLE AND THE GIRL JOLTS IN SURPRISE

 

INTERROGATOR

THIS MEETING IS BEING RECORDED FOR COURT PERPOSES ANYTHING YOU SAY CAN BE USED IN COURT SHALL WE PROCEED

 

GIRL

YES

 

INTERROGATOR

SO WHAT ARE YOU IN FOR

 

GIRL

MURDER

THE GIRL THEN SMERKS

 

INTERROGATOR (ANGRY TONE)

DO YOU THINK THAT THIS IS A JOKE

 

GIRL

NO..NO OF COURSE NOT

 

INTERROGATOR

SO THEN WHO DID YOU KILL

 

GIRL

MY BOYFRIEND

 

INTERROGATOR

YOU’RE BOYFRIEND…. RIGHT SO WHY

INTERROGATOR WRITES NOTES DOWN ON HIS NOTE BOOK

 

GIRL

HE DESERVED IT THOUGH 

 

INTERROGATOR

WHY… WHAT DID HE DO

 

GIRL

IM NOT GONNA TELL YOU

 

INTEROGATOR

IS THAT SO

 

INTEROGATOR

I BET ITS NOT EASY THINKING ABOUT HIM NOW IS IT

WHAT DID HE DO

 

GIRL

NONE OF YOUR BUISNESS

 

INTEROGATOR

WELL THAT’S FINE IVE GOT ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD

 

GIRL

ACTUALLY YOU HAVE 48 HOURS UNTIL I WALK FREE

I KNOW THE LAW

 

INTEROGATOR

AH SO YOU’RE AN INTELEGENT ONE ARENT YOU

 

INTEROGATOR

HOW ABOUT WE TAKE A 5 MINIUTE BRAKE

 

INTEROGATOR

NOW THEIRS ONE THING THAT INTRESSTS ME YOU ACCEPT THE FACT YOU HAVE KILLED HIM AND YOU HAPPILY ADMIT YOU ARE A MURDERER BUT YOU DON’T WANT TO TELL ME WHAT HE DID AND THAT TELLS ME ITS SOMETHNG THAT’S UPSET YOU DEEP DOWN

 

GIRL

YEAH HE HURT ME A BIT BUT I AINT GONNA TELL YOU

 

INTEROGATOR

YOU SAW HIM CHEATING DIDN’T YOU

 

GIRL

WA….UH……UM

GIRL CONTINUES

 

INTEROGATOR

HE DID DIDN’T HE

 

GIRL (STARTS TO BREAK DOWN)

FINE I SAW HIM CHEATING ON ME. HOW DID YOU GUESS

 

INTEROGATOR (CALMING TONE)

IM A DETECTIVE…. SECURTY FOOTAGE.  OKAY… IN YOUR OWN TIME EXPLAIN TO ME

GIVES A TISSUE TO THE GIRL

 

GIRL (STILL STRUGGLING)

WELL, I SORE HIM MAKING OUT WITH ANOTHER GIRL

 

INTEROGATOR

OKAY IS THAT WHY YOU KILLED HIM

 

GIRL

YEAH WHATS WRONG WITH THAT. YOU SEE HE DESERVED IT

 

INTERROGATOR

IS THAT REALLY YOU’RE REASON FOR KILLING HIM

 

GIRL (SMUG TONE)

YEP HE DESERVED IT

 

INTERROGATOR (AGGRESSIVE TONE)

RIGHT YOUNG LADY THAT’S NOT THE WAY TO TALK ABOUT MATTERS LIKE THIS IN THAT WAY. THAT CAN LEAD YOU TO A NICE LONG PRISON SENTENCE

 

GIRL (SARCASTIC)

ALRIGHT DON’T LOOSE YOU’RE MARBLES

 

INTERROGATOR (VERY ANGRY)

RIGHT!!!

SLAMS HANDS ON TABLE

 

INTERROGATOR (STILL ANGRY)

YOU’RE NOT GONNA TALK TO ME LIKE THAT AGAIN OR YOULL ROT AWY IN PRISON YOURE FAMILY WILL FORGET WHO YOU ARE. NO ONE WILL REMEMBER YOU. JUST YOU AND YOUR CRAZY MIND FOR THE REST OF YOURE LIFE ALONE AND YOU WILL ROT AWAY ALONEEEEE!!!!!

 

GIRL SITS THERE IN SILENCE AND LOOKS TO THE FLOOR

 

INTERROGATOR

IS THAT ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY FOR YOURSELF

 

INTERROGATOR

SO HOW DID YOU KILL HIM

 

GIRL

I PUSHED HIM OVER THE EDGE

 

INTERROGATOR

BECAUSE HE KISSED ANOTHER GIRL. RIGHT

 

GIRL

YES

 

INTERROGATOR

IS THERE ANYTHING ELSE YOU WANT TO SAY

 

GIRL

NO

 

INTEROGATOR

CASE CLOSED THIS INTEROGATION IS OVER GIRL HAS ADMITED TO MURDER.

 

(Post 10) Final Casting

 For my short film I need 4 characters:

- Boyfriend (Aged 17 or 18)

- Girlfriend (Aged 17 or 18)

- Police Officer (Any Officer)

- Interrogator (Mr Rowe)

For the role of the boyfriend I want to have a boy who is about 17 or 18 and I also want the girlfriend to be the same age 17 or 18. The interrogator I want it be an adult between 30 - 50. The police officer I want can be of gender and under the age of 50.

(Post 14) Editing Techniques

 For my short film I don’t want to use many editing  techniques because it’s all going to be on scene and angle but there will be a couple of fade cuts in and out of the flashbacks that the girl is going to have throughout. The only camera angle that I will use is going to be over the shoulder of the interrogator and a couple of other shots in the flashbacks

(Post 12) Final Props

 In the opening scene I only want a couple of props to be used and I want more to be introduced as the film progresses 

Opening Scene 

I want a police car and handcuffs in this scene when the girl is getting arrested and put in the car 

In the interrogation 

Throughout my film I’m gonna flash between the interrogation room and the girls flashbacks

When in the interrogation I want to use a number of props I want handcuffs to be used in this scene again because the girl is going to be handcuffed. I also want there to be paper that the interrogator to be writing notes on and this will also include a pen that he’ll be writing notes with. I want there to also be cups of water on the table in clear plastic cups.